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It Didn't Rain!

Submitted by Rula on Mon, 2018-11-26 03:23

It didn't rain.
So black and heavy
Are the clouds.

It didn't rain.

So thirsty is the land
And pale the lane.

It didn't rain.

The soul's crying,
Seeking cleansing
From the pain,
But
It didn't rain!

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

Comments

raj

Mon, 2018-11-26 04:00

Welcome back Rula

use of rain as a metaphor nicely used..
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raj (sublime_ocean)

Rula

Mon, 2018-11-26 14:09

Thank you

dear raj.
Appreciate it highly.

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IRiz

Mon, 2018-11-26 09:29

Hello Rula.

Hello Rula.
Great poem, so sad.
I like the repeated pattern. I worry you may cause a flood if you pray.
I want to re post your lines on Instagram. Ok?

IRiz

Rula

Mon, 2018-11-26 14:10