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Infantile
Perceptual infantality
Mentality of added
Arrogance prideful in
Ignorance
Thinking more but
Knowing less
Doing more with
Soul suppressed
Getting farther in
Your skin
Seeking deeper
From within
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Comments
wesley snow
Tue, 2015-09-08 14:16
I like it.
But I'm a sucker for a reasonably structured poem.
Hi, I'm Wes. Seems you've been gone a while. Glad to see you back.
W. H. Snow
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