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ongoing internal conversations
cloud what reality is slowly
sinking out of me
night shrounded in thoughts
and thoughts
and overanalyzations
distracting the unconscious
from drifting into dreams
and crippling the day
upon wake

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Free verse
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I could totally relate to this poem - as I suspect so could many others! I like the last two lines because they show that insomnia has a crippling effect upon waking - sometimes for a couple of days!

Yeh! I like it

Love Mand xxxx

Thank you! : )

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Good poem to ponder at three A.M. when I can't sleep! LOL!! Seriously, this is a wonderful write, that gets its message across quite profoundly!

you very much Lonnie! : )

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