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Krack a smile
would it hurt
tinfoil cheap capped yearling

Expunge your soiled heartbeat breast
and let the fizz of the jacked up
Beat talk best

Nothing like the rush of things
to better unbecome
Raise a toast by the neck
and taste its Essence
This vessel
Bless it under this
vulgar rain dressed night
that we may be pure
Against the warmth
of this fire
kindled in our loins


Editing stage: 


if you make it the first year
in any relationship your doing good
Odds rations...distractions
ex lovers...and interests

Love is an Overdose
and a crash bus humping you
off the line
a nurse pulling out the lines
when you come around
with the sweetest voice

the world tilts
heavy like a chrome pinball
caught in the sweet spot
of the flipper

when you bottom out
and know theres no
and no adresse
to call that your home


author comment

lovely poem and metaphors, the third stanza is very lyrical and lovely

A heart beat felt
A place of flashing lights
Seeking love
Throws of not knowing
Dream maker of excellence.
Bumping into reality
Is this a reality
The thought echoes.
Lovely write there Steve, now come home safe,
Yours Ian

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