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I N T E R O . .N O I R E
breath the blood of night
staining dark mauve
veins velvet
punctured harsh
dark lust raining
drops to parch
song of lark
arrive the night
tis the sweet
trill for the
death of night
...
Last few words:
shall remain "yours"
in this eternal lull
while hell holds
what heaven shall
not dwell
my Pretti
P
Mr Wolf
~
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Comments
judyanne
Fri, 2012-04-27 04:25
three 'nights' esker
is there any way of using other words for two of them?
as usual - another intriguing write from you
keeps my mind active
i really like
'breath the blood of night
staining dark mauve
... dark lust raining
drops to parch'
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
Esker
Fri, 2012-04-27 06:32
but of course Ms Anne
"Dusk" would replace the first night,
"song of larks
arrive the sight" for the second replacement,
"trill for the death of Midnight" would be the
final change commencement.
I remember a Wiccan freind whom I met
in a psychiatric ward whose evocative
banter would invoke with the play of
threes in speech
the poetry like wording of followings
and language as escort for
the entrance to indoctrination is
a study of mine
Like periphery vision
with age it needs its sharp
refinement when the main
gain feed loses its signal
or if truly ones vision is
or has been altered from
birth the rest of the senses
become discerning
Thank You Judy
Esker
Fri, 2012-04-27 12:33
I found out why NeoPet comes up when you hit search
just a search snook link thingy #65444 netphone links
looked it up
because it comes up on my chrome search window
im not a true nerd
cause if I was this would be a Blog ..