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OF HUMAN BONDAGE II

Submitted by Geremia on Thu, 2012-07-19 15:26

OF HUMAN BONDAGE

I am flesh and soul
I give of my seed
as I give of my heart
I am predator and prey
passion and prayer
and attrition for my sins.
I am nothing more than
who I am
nothing less than
what you want me to be.

DI SCHIAVITÙ II

sono carne e anima
do’ del seme volentieri
come del cuore.
Sono predatore e preda
passione e preghiera
e attrito per i peccati miei
Sono nulla di più che sono
niente di meno che mi dai...

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Esker

Sat, 2012-08-04 21:22

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but not without giving up
no whimper

"I am predator and prey
passiona and prayer"

a great man

what else way is there to live life

Geremia

Sun, 2012-08-05 00:11

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I am glad you liked this one . I wasn;t sure about it.

Joe

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Ian.T

Sun, 2012-08-05 04:05

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Short and to the point, Know that we love that one who you are..
Yours Ian.T

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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

Geremia

Sun, 2012-08-05 05:46

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:) !!

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