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Fixing A Broken Heart

A woman's heart is a fragile item such as glass and china
You must be extra careful and handle her with a strong stamina
For a woman's love is spark of light and you must shine
Do not leave her on the frequency of her humpy pumpy moonshine

For it is essential to acknowledge her when she's on the climax
If her love frequency is hijacked, she's no longer relax
For she's emotionally pounded and her taste is bruised
A woman's pleasure cannot be cajoled or else, her hate is loosed

When all this happen and we cannot bring an end
The fact is, women are the object of love and at the same pretend
But, if we can as well bring a total turn around upon them
Then, we can still maintain the status of our love stem

The basal end of every relationship is building trust
When this trust is not entrusted, the two would distrust
But certainly, when this two lovers are broken apart
Due to mistrust and misconduct, the solution is in their part

But fixing a broken heart in a sour relationship its not child's play
For those who experienced it knew is not sweet as foreplay
We must continue to engage our dear love on a routine check
By constant messaging, calling or apologizing or even paycheck

© Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu

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I see where you are coming from on this score. I do believe that you are trying to say, that most women want to be romanced
and some of them equate romance with the giving of something of value. Devotion, kindness and sometimes they think that you should give them your paycheck! I agree that some of them do feel that if you love them, you should take care of them in
financial way, but most of them need emotional support more than that. Keep writing, you will see that you improve the more that you read of other's work. Welcome to Neopoet. ~ Geezer.
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You nailed it plain!

Thank you so much for your time to go through.

"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

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having raised two daughters, I'm thinking that you are spot on....

"humpy pumpy". needs a bit of fine tuning... left me wondering if you meant the sex, or something else...

I suggest that you get an actual breathing woman to read this, and comment!

Good Piece!

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I suggest that you get an actual breathing woman to read this, and comment!

Good Piece!

Thank you so much for teading.

I got all you said!

"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".

~Jackweb

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