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fairlane scuze

pencil in the articulated slink
in the shadows
hair in bangs fallen fallow
brilliant like mink

We texture
us extravaganza
eyes disc cartography
gleam like obsidian
bling

falling into the pools
Succubus
extortion
and my fingers
search for the
pulse tip satin skin
riding like a coaster
beatufiul devoter
Incubbus intrepid

Stop

whisper swallow
deemed rapture
savage
poised with leaning
velvet curvature
throat exposed
the design of sighs
shaking leaves
above in summer fat
winds

elongated longing
clasp in a tenure grasp
and guided fast
the quick harsh
ride

Stir spirits alive
in zones of fury
colliding Drury

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Comments

It feels a bit like a list of words.
Perhaps a reading might help
https://soundcloud.com/neopoet/fairlane-scuze-submitted-by

cheers,
Jess
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