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F E T C H angular intertia

Submitted by Esker on Sun, 2016-10-02 14:08

Crazy dayschemes
folding niche schematic masters
shinny tools worn with duty
loosing fools glorybound
reduced to sifting Lost and Found

trinket hearts hesitant clause
we clinked on chains and
weathered wrists
we dreamed of lovers
harried kiss

dampnesss slinks with
a dawn breaking
spool of raindrops
unwinding all binding

I have a shot of U
in profile
the beret found in
Paris...burberry
trenchcoat
penny loafers
the dark trees rise
up
black veins on a
dim sky
Pawned Leica
cash for Luv
one foot ahead
the other
balancing on
a curbstop
arms outstretched
ballerina style
racing to the sky

inventions of Hope
you said of our clouds
that dangled like
the swirl of dreams
majesty of glory

daisy wishes
one pure petal
at a tug
like memories

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Geezer

Mon, 2019-03-18 13:07

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what your title means, and I guess I never will now. I always loved that you had a way of making me feel that you knew that I was listening to your conversations with your loved ones, but it was though I was a favored wind or one of your wolf pack. "I have a shot of you in profile..." Thank you, Mister Wolf, I will always be indebted for being included and thought of as a "wolf brother". ~ Gee.
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