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Evisceral

an ugly shade
the silver
unbecoming
like the underscore
of a world
grown more

sip our emotions
and pop the lid
on our handholding
feet up on the dirty
plastic chairs
the sunshine
welting into our
photo sensitive
realms

we know nothing
of intimacy
and everything
about just being

the grunge secrecy
worlds betrayed
how we are so
used to that
brutality

but sitting together
our hair on eachs
shoulder
feeling the words
vibrate off our
skin
the heat of our
overlapping

legs hanging
across the
thighs
the delicate
small bonework
the street sassy
survivor

the spoons
were dark
as new moons
and the sunlight
shone into
your
pupils like new
rooms

we met past
dusk for
hot chocolate
and said nothing
walking about
the puddles
in the parking

even our ghosts
walked in line
and the tenderness
like a pause
on an old telephone
was heard
behind the
hiss
and static

we exist!

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Comments

bravado young warlock

we both have mates..she does.so do I
both are opposing forces for various reasons
but I said....Im just going to join this for a day
meet ..go on an outing
and have a day here or there
and we did....
it was odd...

odd that it was an odd thing to do
the tarnish metaphor
was good

life has given much ragged edges
and thickness
and the sensitive was the
sharing the chocolate
holding hands
asking her to sit on my lap
more like a vantage point
and feel..

we are not boyfriend girlfriend
it was more like
this will end idle chatter
and see if it sets anything inside
us to abuzz or comfort
and it did both and more

a quiet now

an actual event..
I wrote about from life..

thank you

author comment

A beauty rising
from stark points,
Held in belonging
for a tirade of reason.
Feelings stretched
A bond touching
Minutes made eons
A love
Yes a love,
The colours of absence
Drifting light
Catching stars
If only I could touch those stars again young wolf in reality not poetry..
A grand write from a truth of life,
Yours, Ian.T

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

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