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Ethereal Intwination

Rembranches reaching through
Heavenly hollows in the clouds
Tranquilly shaping unguided thoughts
of gardens in vasettes
deeply set in delerium

Style / type: 
Free verse
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Though your words are from another place or time, they had the ability to paint a picture of a trance like floating bordering on the feverish..
Well I just can't find a meaning for several of your big words maybe they are local to where you live,
Yours Ian.T

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

you! Ha, i wouldn't say they're local to where I live. I just like using big words.
& sometimes I make words up; like "Rembranches", for example.


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