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EIN SPATZ

Submitted by Esker on Mon, 2012-08-27 21:02

killing wings
she spreads
and in her legs she cradles

BOMBEN

harvester of darkness
slipstream
godess

bringing Valkryies mighty honors
in the vanquished anguished
eve

the torrent of the sins deliverance
by pure beauty
by pure creed

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Nordic cloud

Wed, 2012-08-29 15:30

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As aye- just goDDess as I missed the d.
You blatantly blandish your goddess
of splendour in front of our eyes.
You wicked painter of words :)
Ann.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

Esker

Sat, 2012-09-01 23:30

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If you can look up North Superior Our great lake
over a days drive from here just to Sault St Marie
The shores and wilds are a park along the trans canada

the lake is beyond description...the end of shipping storms
famous..Ive been to Midland and Tobermory and Owen Sound
at the turn of the century famous port towns citys..
haunted beauty.. Superior has its highlands too of its
own Not the towering ones of Norse The Fjords etc
the myth beings the myth creatures
and all vain glorius and redeemed or not by acts

winged stature...Our eagles..the coastal raptors and
the gliding fish ones...

amazing sites too Ann

and the war birds of course even now
a beauty in the knowing the purpose is to drop
death...How they call them by female names

the storns the winters... Your lands are so beautiful
Ours it muted and gentler here
till further north of Temagami on the highway
..

I like your sign slogan too Kenzan...
Thank You

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Ian.T

Sun, 2012-09-02 04:18

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Once again a look through your eyes, may be confusing to a few, but I love the title

Ein Spatz a sparrow or bird.. Sparrow is very happy with you lol.

wie ein Spatz essen "to peck at one's food
besser ein Spatz in der Hand als eine Taube auf dem Dach
a bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.

.BOMBEN Well we can drop the Bomb thing lol.

Your walk across nations was grand from the Fjords to the Temagami
A fleeting glimpse of culture and beauty so much hidden in there..

Temagami--What a beautiful part of the world Just over 1500 people live there and the beauty should be shown to the world,
Love the connection to the Bear.
Take care out there as you are the speaking Spirit of your people here, Yours Ian.T

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So find more reasons to believe in others..

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