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DRIVING THE STUART

hardtack black plain
'Mothers" "drive me wild"
cranked through the Jensens
spedometer wavering at
one eighty
as much as this old Holden
can take
no sign of the SHMP units
pass another dead roo
crack open another Vickie Bitter
aint got no P's and Red's
just driving till this days end!!

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Though i'm a non believer, I wish you were still driving them wild somewhere. Love Roscoe..

Roscoe Llane,

Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.

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