The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "DEATH BY A THOUSAND SUN'S" evokes a sense of destruction and loss in its vivid imagery and intense emotions. The use of descriptive language helps to create a haunting atmosphere throughout the poem. However, there are a few areas where the poem could be strengthened.

Firstly, consider the structure of the poem. While the fragmented lines and lack of punctuation contribute to the chaotic and disorienting tone, it may be helpful to introduce some form of structure or organization to guide the reader through the narrative. This could be achieved through the use of stanzas or varying line lengths.

Additionally, the poem contains several powerful images, such as "shattered sparkle of spears like fragments" and "skinless warm bones lying like together but alone." However, it would be beneficial to further develop these images and explore their significance. What do these images represent? How do they contribute to the overall theme or message of the poem?

Furthermore, the poem introduces the idea of being

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describes the bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. I like the images that describe the intense heat that might have melted the flesh right off from the bones and the incineration of thousands. I'm sure that if there is such a thing as a ghost, there are many who wander these sites, walking through walls. I do wish that you had used some commas and other punctuation, it would make for easier understanding. I would change the line to read " A shattered sparkle of spear-like fragments". ~ Geezer.
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The imagery gave not only a visual but audio representation of the explosion. It really tapped into all the senses as you can envision the burned bodies...can almost hear them screaming for their lives and smell the flesh. Well done!