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dash dot la creme

porpoise winds
like a water rich bank

the arc full of shinning
in the crash
to the liquid embrace

the engines idling
the bank wide
horizon endless
blue deep
beneath the roll
at our feet

All the years later
the mermaids
tranquil eyes
gleam with the
wet lash
the fresh pupil
in all the freedom
like a summer rain
a sprinklers cascade
at dusk
shadowed like
the corners of
a tender mouth
drawn down
the chin up

the wind rushes
across the dark
where cold
freezes muddy puddles
the lights shimmer
through the tangled
limbs grappling

all the years fluttered
by like cards
blown off a table
in a storm
the hearts
and diamond lessons
of life
caught us up

and we pass like
in the mall

knowing nothing
of the sun
the night
the snows

we are shadows
a brilliance
outshinning us

Editing stage: 


Captivating read! Lovely flow and wonderful imagery.

"Death" is nonsense: what is there to die?
"Life"? How could " life" "die"? That is a contradiction
in terms. Can "light" become "darkness"?
"Light" can only cease to be apparent

Wei Wu Wei

the moments like a flash powder
the glass plate
the photographer magician stealing souls..

concieved celebrating Kennadies
born on July ninth
and given up
for my grey blue tinged green with
brown fleck eyes
magician eyes

the light brilliance
shot up
in the dark
like a voice
soft and masterful

of all the creative
Ive followed
over the years

I see how the
eclectic mix works
for them


author comment

too marvelous
words simply flow
as does the Niagara
but ur in Ottawa

and which year ???

Julius Caesar was born as a LIbra
but they included him as in July
after he failed to become Emperor
His son Octavia did the honours
and Leo a Brutus
do u have someone chasing you
under the sun
A Leo one?

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