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CERULEAN

Submitted by Esker on Thu, 2012-10-18 01:13

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lay beneath the crest of a dream
troposphere grave
glean of a hot scene

the frost fire sheen

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Ian.T

Mon, 2012-10-22 10:58

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A gain words that hold so much in their being, a beautiful range of Blue spread throughout the thoughts of the writer, where the comments are much longer than the write LOL
Yours Ian.T

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Esker

Fri, 2012-10-26 20:13

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we see just the arch of morning
on the bottom of the troposphere
and it looks like a hot sunny morning
in pictures

but in reality its that cold fire
the ice on everything
the crisp clear clear air
that makes everything jump out!!

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