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c a r c a s s e
a machine is a wreck
with flesh
purpose its mere
animation
people...pets..
animals are Love
care..survival
nurture if all went
well
they are not wrecks
but flesh and bone
heart and soul
journeys and travels
routs and rails
flightpaths
and compounds
and of the Creatures
collisions of Love
of Night things
and Day beings
the clash
power
control
a fever
smouldering
behind the cheap
orchestra boom
box
vortex of wills
and fires swirling
consuming
precious works
on paper
on digital
memory the falliable
cemetary
wwe dream its setting
its paths
the trees
and every dream
is different
the harder
to seek what cannot
be sought
the further
distant
I need to take
advice of my
new
guide
someone new
on the scene
not that she knows
we never truly know
we can only take
it up for what its
worth...
.....
Comments
Vivovon
Wed, 2016-08-17 13:52
a sightseeing tour
It seems like a sightseeing tour through the nature havoc. Exciting and attractive. Make sure that your tour guide knows every turn and twist.
xxxxx
Esker
Wed, 2016-08-17 17:07
Vivovon
well...I love watching car restoration shows....U may say..Why Steven..your liscence has been taken by the provincial goverment by sammy chung neurosurgeon Big man of Sudbury in late nineties..Sammy who was a younger version from Blade Runner Dude who Just does eyes..I just do eyes actor....put bathing cap with wires..shot lights at my eyes..and there it was Temporal Lobe epilepsy...and worse kind....when I slept....but pills keep it at bay..but he had to Inform MTO and a seargant when I was hitchiking got on his computer and cancelled my liscence....Before that...I worked with people that did frame off restorations...People bright enough to take a tractor..a tank apart...put bolts in a bucket and put it together again....Their brains are that clever..Mine is not...but I love machines....care restoration show..out of Vegas....One clip a cousin comes into the big garage....they are building a rat rod...and hes got the vegas tourist train...like a lawn cart or gas tractor made like a little train pulling little cars with tourists and he is using his megahorn to describe the location and mechanics...The boss gives him shit at first and the tourists all raise their hand when asked if they love the tour.....But I have given me the happy connection too this.....what if we are tourists on a foreign planet......Nasa watchs with robotic eyes and posts its tourist pics to the space nerds..Of which I am one....but what if we could describe.....Star Trek did this year ago.....No one ever critisized the character Kirk....what if he was Cook finding christmas Island......Break out the megahorn....
Thank U!
Vivovon
Thu, 2016-08-18 14:37
quite an experience
Dear Esker
It is quite an experience. Live in it happily.
xxxxx