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BROKEN LIGHTS

Submitted by Geremia on Fri, 2016-03-04 12:56

BROKEN LIGHTS

I wanted to write a short poem
today,
but my words like ghosts
quickly fade away
and my soul has grown silent
and cold.
my heart in darkness
shrouds the splendor of a world
that once glowed in me.
I am lost in a void ….
no Light to see
no voice to sing
nothing

Editing stage:

Editing - rough draft

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Fri, 2016-03-04 13:08

Seren's picture

Oh my Joe ..

Oh my Joe ..

I know this feeling all too well

Crushingly sad :(

Beautiful work as per the norm darlin'

Love your Jayne xxx

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Fri, 2016-03-04 13:28

Geremia's picture

It is a hell. love, your Joe

It is a hell.

love, your Joe

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Fri, 2016-03-04 14:57

lovedly's picture

but

of hell you make the most
this is heaven
tell all of us
when you reach there

god bless

you have many years of poetry ahead
lights are not out yet

Sat, 2016-03-05 08:42

Geremia's picture

And Christ always, be with

And Christ always, be with you, dear friend.

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Sat, 2016-03-05 11:21

lovedly's picture

God Bless

you Joe

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