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bao trai

the heat is an emotion
like the fluid exertion
roll over and inhale
the burning shit
aroma swirling above
the buffalo hay and
buildings scattered

dried mud flakes
on everything
we are mummies
of canals where
everyone crawls
slowly

the roads mined
and everything crushed
by the forty eight tons
of the tankers

thick american diesel
exhaust

dont mind the stinking of
the water takes the monotony
away
the slick slings against the
mud the sixty working again
and we cut down the "little joe's"
with the sixteens
wait for the arvn's to pick up the
survivors

the sky is full of holes where
it dips against where the saw grass
grows

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zero altims..
flat out across the paddies
at the trees
only happy thought
is we all will die
if the blades fall off
equality is a strange liberty here
Buff and Charlie run together
when we zap over them at
over a hundred miles an hour
pulling up at the last minute
miss the trees and back down
again

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