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Submitted by Esker on Tue, 2012-09-04 22:39

jaw land dirty world
compacts and candy

flaw across the scar of sun
cutting cross tender bone
the hip throne

I can hear your breath
the hitchs
crying through a phone

put me down babe
put me down

cruel safetys off
to let you cold fire finger
pull ventral ebullience

drip hesitant kisses
drop memory in park

let our idle agony
spill runaway
hearts

into the damned
and lost of dark

.........

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judyanne

Wed, 2012-09-05 08:01

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you can do it by text these days - even safer

i love this
great imagery as usual
esker awesome

love judy
xxx

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weirdelf

Wed, 2012-09-05 09:21

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transcends text, condoms and handguns.

You at your best.

Yes, as you said to me recently, I do have a love/hate relationship with your poetry. I consider you one of the finest poets I have read, so can over-react when I feel disappointed. This one did not disappoint.

cheers,
Jess
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