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Cigarette wrecks in a saucer
gold rimmed Cadillac butts

its ten thirty and the border is open
The radio crackles its hiss and pop show
the faraway flawless dead come alive
to croon

baby you said its all rock and roll

and on with the Show

My back is wretched I wound and climbed
on the hot asphalt
through glade trails of green
where the creek swollen rushed
the clouds gave birth and
the deluge washed the sins
of summer down gulping dark
apertures of underground
the sweet sweat of hidden thoughts
chilled and rippling with light
through the breaks

If I could comfort you I would

but you've become the Lost
and not forsaken
never taken

You;ve become the scuff upon
the wall
out in the empty voice of midnights
hall

your lipstick visits
brown tip extravagance
smitten with a tangy
curl like the thick
clouds tensed and
crackling

I can feel you reaching
like you did
your arms
swaying

you would never come
down

a promise you said
You'd lain amongst
the fallen
whom had given up

and all the fear
was swallowed up
like a jacknife borrowed
folded closed

our love will rust you said
We are chrome just plated
for our show

and you know what else??

you bent to my ear
and whispered the key..........

Its never gonna be that easy!

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Comments

as one living outside the States, (Way further than Canada I.e. More removed, more objective) you nailed this one! The existential angst, the hopelessness, the futility - all thinly disguised in colloquial jargon!
Echoes of Eugene O'Neil, or Sam Shephard, against a Kerouac backdrop!
Loved it!

Bonitaj

Figured I would post a matching Pic of my mug too
usually I pick poster style pics that make me look
good but this time This is what I look like after two
weeks of restless nights and little sleep and much
here and there on the bike. (Before I wore the
crank bearings out..damn! but good!!)

Border is open....a time of being of a place
in time..a magic hour when darkness slips
in and rain or winter or the quiet stillness permeates
everything And the ego relaxes
or comes alive maybe

Eugene O'Neil I have never read nor Sam Shephard
Kerouac always had his backdrops and his dialogues
were mastery of quick flowing tells

lately been feeling much in character mode waking up
like this from dreams in character Hard to describe
but Im at work for a good three hours before I realize
Im still fresh away from the rainsoaked night or winter
frozen air from a dream in towns I frequented
and passed through on my journeys With or without
the significance of remembering
Until I dream.....

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Something in this that people can catch
thats the music of writing Bella
thats the voice I looked for in books
that would take me away in their
short lengths
their thick mass
and I would burn through them
in a night starving and ravenous
or I would savour them
hungering through the days
while the day crept from the roof
and rested under the eaves saying
farewell for the day

Thank You

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