The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "3AM competition" is a narrative piece that explores the themes of insomnia, the internet, and the potential dangers of seeking medical help online. The poem effectively builds suspense and intrigue, leading the reader through a series of events that culminate in an unexpected outcome.

The poem could benefit from a more consistent use of punctuation and capitalization. There are instances where capital letters are used in the middle of sentences, such as "The web.my loud echos of typing" and "With a coat of black covering me". These instances can be confusing for the reader and disrupt the flow of the poem.

The poem also contains a few typographical errors that could be corrected, such as "hasn't catched up" which should be "hasn't caught up", and "it did do Do what the Dr and the label say" where the repetition of "do" seems unintentional.

The poem could also benefit from more precise and evocative language. For instance, the line "a quick remedy for not sleeping" could be rephrased to something like "a swift cure for my sleeplessness" to add more depth and nuance to the narrative.

The narrative structure of the poem is compelling, but the conclusion could be made more impactful. The line "has Shut down and it can't be traced" seems to abruptly end the narrative. Providing more details about the protagonist's feelings or the consequences of their actions could add more depth to the ending.

Overall, the poem presents an interesting narrative and explores relevant themes. With some revisions to improve clarity, precision of language, and narrative depth, it could be even more engaging for readers.

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you keep playing with this one. I'm not sure if your misspellings are intentional or not, if they are... if they aren't, it is just a minor discouragement to reading this again. Yeah, you could've made more interesting, but I'm not sure that you would've gotten this far with it. Keep on keeping on. ~ Geezer.
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