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Walt77
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Nature’s Fashion Model
Silky wings,
Flutter in the breeze,
Landing,
On every,
Flowers and trees.
As a,
Hummingbird on the wing,
Taking,
Nature's sweet candy,
In spring.
Coloured wings,
Fly in the wind,
Like angelic angels,
That came,
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To sing.
Wings shimmers,
In the light,
Causing wonder,
And delight,
Nature’s butterflies in flight.
In spring,
Summer and fall,
Nature’s fashion models,
Down the runway,
Comes to call.
As winters,
Breath whispers gently,
The model sleeps,
Awaking in spring,
Butterflies’ puro lets gracefully
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09 MonAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2022
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09 WedAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2021
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05 ThuReceived a critique
on Nature’s Fashion Model from @Geezer
"The main reason that I wanted to comment, yet I forgot! The word 'angelic' ! ~ Geez. ." -
05 ThuReceived a critique
on Nature’s Fashion Model from @Triskelion
"can you find another word for either angelic or angels in S3L3? The phrase "angelic angels" repeats one word against the other. I think your poem is worth a little more work. Thomas" -
05 ThuReceived a critique
on Nature’s Fashion Model from @Geezer
"of Butterflies and birds being angels. Only a couple of criticisms here. You use a lot of plurals where they are not needed. 1] Flower[s] and tree[s]. 2] Shimmer[s] 3] come[s] to call 4] Winter, being personalized, shou…" -
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- March 2021
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09 TueFirst publication
Lass of Autumn
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09 TueJoined Neopoet
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I love to write poetry
Location: Ontario, Canada, CAN
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