talkingcat

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after the gold rush

Posted Feb 23, 2010 · 14 lines · 1 critiques

i walk the line between
the floral 50's and free-sex seventies,
the presha of kids, money and bathroom tiles,
he wants me to enjoy it
and desire him
not just suffer it and allow him

if humans were to get it right
as some must do,
feeling loving and protected,
would we be so brutal with our surroundings?
would the brim ful enable
a sensitive perception
that life in life
is quite enough?

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September 2014
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Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
March 2010
03 Wed

Received a critique
on after the gold rush from @Millage
"...because I am a fan of a band called goldrush. I really enjoyed the read. Especially the references to 50's and 70's. I am very old school and that one line alone to me spoke volumes. Much love Millage x"
February 2010
23 Tue

Posted a poem
after the gold rush
"i walk the line between"
Open thread 14 lines
22 Mon

Received a critique
on fling from @Seren
"LMAO Mum you crack me up ... its the water and the dust mixing the paint for the the dreamscape ;) lol congrates on spotlight with this brilliant poem ... YES~! hahaha I loved it kind regards love Jayne-Chloe"
22 Mon

Received a critique
on fling from @Kailashana
"Hey, I resemble that remark! What is it with Aussies? The water, the dust, the dreamscape? ~A "If parents really would love their children there would no longer be any war." J. Krishnamurti"
22 Mon

Posted a poem
fling
"can i come over and sublimate?"
Open thread 8 lines
20 Sat

Posted a poem
Jig-saw
"I take myself apart"
Open thread 10 lines
15 Mon

Highest posting month
February 2010 — 9 poems
09 Tue

First critique offered
on "Unrest" by @Xanthe
09 Tue

First publication
Different Class