Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.

X

Unrest

Strict clock of rhythmic contempt
Reverberating through your
Tangled thrashing hindrance
Rotates quickly, then it drags.

Cowing emptiness ensues
And this house of creaking things
Reminds of your unrest
In a world long-lost to dream.

Sliver of another day
Crawls across the paintwork
Through a crack in the curtains
That you were not aware of.

A milky wash of lost time
In the gasping paling sky
Another night of numb
Spent rewording stale thoughts.

Strict clock of rhythmic contempt
Blares through your deep failure
With assured precision
Sirens force the dead upright.
— Xanthe, Feb 09, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

More from this author

Critiques

T

talkingcat

16 years 3 months ago

Dark and textured like old

Dark and textured like old wallpapaer, can touch the feelings snaking through, thanks! Thats what i love about poetry, the distant intimacy..
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 3 months ago

Wow great first poem

Hi Xanthe lovely write ...Liked the descriptive in this on Sliver of another day Crawls across the paintwork Through a crack in the curtains That you were not aware of. Look forward to reading more of your work soon Seabhac
X

Xanthe

16 years 3 months ago

Thankyou

Thankyou all. This is all rather new to me, and I appreciate your taking the time to give me feedback. Xanthe