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Glider

Submitted by Esker on Sat, 2011-07-16 09:50

soar
the inertia flow
the wheel turning
shinning at the hub
vortex passage

seated in the cool shade
the garden lush colours
the chains mired to hooks
in the wood slat ceiling
we rock to and fro
while hummingbirds taste
the nectar

up there the black bird
like a dream
caught in a thermal thought
rising stark and in motion

gliding when I dream
leaving this body
this freedom like a wish

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Candlewitch

Fri, 2011-07-22 11:07

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gliding when I dream
leaving this body
this freedom like a wish

almost like astral travel... I liked this poem very much.

always, Cat

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Esker

Sun, 2011-07-31 14:36

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was forever trying to see around,
or sometimes through...
realizing its in the curve of intuition
"astral travel" .. yes i remember now...

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