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your nose is growing
So,
you wanted to be a porn king,
my little rascal,
and you thought big
and you talked a good schtik,
going through all the motions
until you came to my conclusion.
It's all right, Jack, go on. Write poems
of ejaculation and I'll read them
on occasion. But please don't be breaking
all the mirrors in your house fucking yourself to death,
you might get cut out of your own show while it'cccs still
on the road.
Amen.
Last few words:
Ever meet a poet who thinks he's god's gift to romance and erotic poetry?
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weirdelf
Thu, 2012-02-23 17:44
It's not as funny as it sounds
My schizophrenic girlfriend broke all the mirrors in her house,
and cut herself badly.
She was dragged away by the cops, naked, she refused to wear clothes.
What is schizophrenia? A brilliant mind? A mind that doesn't fit our 'norm'?
This poem hurt me, because of the the humour. but that is probably why it shouldn't have hurt me.
Kailashana, you are brilliant.
cheers,
Jess
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Kailashana2
Thu, 2012-02-23 17:55
How is she now, Jess? So
How is she now, Jess? So very sorry.
Brilliant? I'm just full of myself. lol.
Hugs,
Anna
author commentweirdelf
Thu, 2012-02-23 18:44
she is doing fine
unlike bipolar schizophrenia gets better
cheers,
Jess
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Kailashana2
Fri, 2012-02-24 07:27
My dad was bipolar with
My dad was bipolar with schizoid tendencies. I remember one head-shrinker saying that if he found *religion* (spirituality?) it might be beneficial. For me, he was the antithesis of a religious man though his brilliance also was curtailed by the most horrific of the drugs of his time...all the ines... thorazine, stelazine...etc.
I wish I knew then what I know now.
~A
p.s. I think you are doing fine too, Jess. We all have our shadow sides (well at least most of us, some perhaps don't), best we own them.
author commentemogothgirl
Fri, 2012-02-24 11:40
hell yes i've met a poet like that
not in person but it still is ridiculous. great job, i loved it.
always,
mag
Kailashana2
Fri, 2012-02-24 14:41
Thanks mags, rather than
Thanks mags, rather than trolling for women in bars, its poetry groups. Hopefully no young woman (or older woman) will fall for their schtik. Unfortunately, I did some years ago when I thought *he* was beyond reproach or maybe it was all in my head. lol.
~A
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