Electric Blue

Member since May 28, 2011

Member for 15 years

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The Yellow Rose of Friendship

Posted Jun 13, 2021 · 19 lines · 3 critiques

This yellow rose of friendship
a tie between two friends

Someone to give me a hug
When life seems at an end

Someone who understands
all my hopes and fears

Someone who is there
and wipes away my tears

Someone who knows
of my sad loss

Of my best friend
so far away has gone

someone who knows
Why I am so forlorn

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Someone who has seen
my ocean of tears

Thank you is not enough
For you. my friend

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Electric Blue’s timeline

May 2026
28 Thu

Anniversary
15 years of membership
June 2021
15 Tue

Received a critique
on Calling all Angels from @c lynn brooks
"eigth stanza gets stuck , see if this smooths it out "Can you not see" instead of cannot you see me, or why can you not see me then can you not turn back the time would be something like , why then can't you turn back t…"
14 Mon

Received a critique
on The Yellow Rose of Friendship from @Ray Whitaker
"Love the ending, as a stand alone line"
14 Mon

Received a critique
on Missing Mama's Smile from @Ray Whitaker
"Yeah, some of my best work comes from remembering my dreams. Connections, images, flow, all sometimes come from my dreams. Nice to read that someone else works with those.."
13 Sun

Posted a poem
The Yellow Rose of Friendship
"This yellow rose of friendship"
Open thread 19 lines
05 Sat

Posted a poem
Calling all Angels
"I call the angels"
Open thread 32 lines
02 Wed

Posted a poem
Missing Mama's Smile
"Down by the riverside"
Open thread 19 lines
May 2021
28 Fri

Anniversary
10 years of membership
May 2016
28 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
May 2012
28 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
May 2011
28 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
November 2009
15 Sun

Critique milestone
1,000 critiques given
September 2009
29 Tue

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
December 2008
24 Wed

Most-discussed work
Death

39 critiques to date.
March 2008
15 Sat

Highest posting month
March 2008 — 18 poems
February 2008
27 Wed

First critique offered
on "test22" by @louis
27 Wed

First publication
Song of the Ocean