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Universe

My love
We ride on the dust of the comet
On the crest of the Milky Way

We are lost inside ourselves
within the interlacing
of our souls

Somewhere through the
Intersection of time and space

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you are well on your way, on a journey that will take us somewhere. I'd like to see where it goes. ~ Geez.
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Geezer

We are all on a never ending journey through the cosmos.

Electric Blue

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I like your poem Maggie :~)
later,
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Mark

we all travel the gravel road of a never ending journey through the cosmos.

Electric Blue

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Don't know where the next life will take me but I feel it will be another planet or another dimension a body but no pain. So long as I have my books and those I love I'll not complain. Well I will complain even in heaven.

Dalton

As i say

i see or hear something and my mind explodes and this was the results

no planning just being

just taken to places unseen

Thank you my friend

Always Electric Blue

Electric Blue

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