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Electric Blue
Electric Blue
May 17, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

As you Slumber

To the king of my heart as he slumbers

 

This is a time I treasure the most. A time to share to be so close
To be held in his loving embrace looking at my truelove’s face
This time not measured by the clock he is sturdy as a rock

 

To feel him breathing on me oh how safe do I feel
as his heartbeats gentley so steady my man of steel
His radiance, the Aurora Borealis cannot compare
My love is himself a cosmic event
He makes me feel so content
Here is the only place
I long to be for all
eternity

 

He is my King and I want to be his queen
He is my knight tall dark leather clad
With a heart full of light and fight
oh to my delight

 

All I have is my heart so true to give to you
My body and soul you already own.
You have music in your soul
You are poetry in motion
You have my devotion

 

Electric blue

— Electric Blue, May 17, 2010

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Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years ago

As you Slumber

Welcome my friend Thank you for looking in on my poem it is the little everyday things that mean the most. Electric blue
L

Lonnie

16 years ago

Niceley done, Maggie!

I don't often see poems by you, but thankfully I noticed this one! You have a great ability to pour out your emotions into a poem and make the reader feel them as deeply as you do! Bravo dear Lady!
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years ago

As you Slumber

Dearest Lonnie Well my pen is my only friend I can pour out my heart too. All I have are memories with such longings and desires. Thank you for looking at my poem Electric blue so blue
yenti

yenti

16 years ago

Maggie

As time passes so we turn to view all our things with a serious look, that of love , then of beauty that others cannot see, then feel the rest that days gone by and hope to come our spirit tells us these thing's then we should listen more. A lovely piece from your heart lovely lady, Yours Yenti
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years ago

As You Slumber

Yenti My dear friend. Some how I do feel out of place and out of time to most others. They seem to move faster than I, I feel I am in slow motion to the rest of the world taking my time to view inner and outer feelings and awareness listening to my heart and soul So sad others miss out on the beauty of the soul that shines as an eternal flame. This is the only place I am and ever want to be. Electric Blue
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years ago

As You Slumber

Yenti My dear friend. Some how I do feel out of place and out of time to most others. They seem to move faster than I, I feel I am in slow motion to the rest of the world taking my time to view inner and outer feelings and awareness listening to my heart and soul So sad others miss out on the beauty of the soul that shines as an eternal flame. This is the only place I am and ever want to be. Electric Blue
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years ago

Dear Maggie

The whole poem is wonderful, on a subject I feel strongly and deeply. I cannot fail to give you five sparklies! Love, Cat
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years ago

As you Slumber

Cat Thank you my friend it is the only place I want to be. I just love sparklies always my dear friend maggie xx
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

beautiful maggie

i have a little lump in my throat right now. love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

15 years 11 months ago

As you slumber

Judy With my dark knight beside him I long to be long arms around me cradling just me where we are one totally completely Feeling his heart beating next to mine such music we create notes so divine so sweet like a fine red wine Thank you for looking in All I long for is this for all eternity again love and hugs maggie xx
loved

loved

15 years 10 months ago

THY MIND IS

Creative indeed thats what is the hours need let us rejoice in eternity and slumber once for all when done is the deed
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

15 years 10 months ago

As you Slumber

Loved Thank you for looking in on my poetry All I long for is to return the this embrace and be cradled for all eternity Electric Blue