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Earth bound spirit

Purple sky with silver moon
I see smoke rising gently
from a smouldering fire

Nearby my angel
with silver wings

Dipping her toes
into a gentle stream
full of moonlight

I can smell the
incense burning

its fragrance fills the air
So overpowering
To send you into dreams

Stars light the way
In the darkening sky

Midnight promises
Voices heard as
whispers on the wind

Full of desires
Serpent smiles lure you

With Enchantment

Electric blue

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Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
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This was a poem dedicated to my dear Neo Poet friend Kaz AKA Purple Moon Doll. I was honoured that she read this and responded with heart felt love before she sadly was take from us with Cancer. I tend to stream my words. No real mechanics for me. I am just me.
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and delighted to see you after so long! I thought I recognized your name, but wasn't sure until I saw your avatar. Who could miss that beautiful blue hair? Still blue, is it? Anyway, I remember your style and think that you have not abandoned it. I remember that you could and did rhyme, [even if it wasn't intended]. Streaming thoughts are as poetic as any rhyme or meter
when you do as you have done. Welcome back and I hope that we see much more of you in the future! ~ Geezer.

It seems that the days and hours that people
are available for chatroom are staggered and
not a good match for most everyone. How about
if everyone just shows up at the door, whenever
they have a few free minutes?

Thank you my friend.

It has been a while because life gets in the way.

As i said i tend to just stream

very few are rhyming

i just let it flow until the last drop falls onto the page.

Thank you for your kind comments

I will try and post one poem a week.

Still not sure of this new format of find everyone to view their poetry.

Happy to back in my Neo poet family

I am sure many of you will inspire me.

Electric Blue

author comment

this is certainly an enchanted write! you weave a spell of lovely words...I look forward to reading more of your work!

always, Cat

When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.


Glad to be back.

The world has not been very kind.

So hope my creativity has returned.

Look forwards to reading other poetry and get inspired.



Still trying to find my way around this new format.

I hope i can find your work and be drawn into the mystical universe.

Electric Blue

author comment

Yes, life is often unkind. This is a very smooth read for the most part and what a wonderful gift for you both to create this and have it received with love. I particularly like stanza 3, which feels very tender.


Thank you my friend

Yes life has not been too kind over the years i have lost all my family now.

Life has just got in the way.

Still taking care of business but my mind gas started to wonder

I hope to post more soon.

I have not found my way around this new format yet.

looking forward to be inspired by reading Neo family poetry.



Electric Blue

author comment

I usually am not a fan of such a vertical form but you have used it well and just might convert me lol


Thank you my friend

I tend to stream and not really know or have studied the mechanics of writing.

i get a spark and words fall onto the paper that waits. Like tear drops until the last one.

Electric Blue

Electric Blue

author comment

A strong narrative and images from the real world not merely the imagination which is he stuff of many poets myself included. This poem comes from somewhere and it's in memory of someone you loved no crit that's all I have to say


My friend hello.

As i said i was on my way to the airport and saw a sign LONG MEADOW

and i just started streaming and this was the result in less than ten minuets

A vision before me lay. All i did was write it down.


Electric Blue

I tried to open your poetry but still could not. so still trying to find my around this new format.

Electric Blue

author comment

Don't know why you're having trouble opening my poems. Doesn't matter they're no different from anyone else's.

I remember you from before

i went to the list and saw your name so wanted to view your poetry again and comment too.

i tried to view other poets but still could not access from the list.


Electric Blue

author comment

Try going to authors page . It should give you the authors entire works. If this still doesn't work contact paul. He will get it straightened out

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