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f a u w l t i smal porshunashun

Submitted by Esker on Thu, 2013-09-12 13:46

jewel gem
cutter
draw tight
this slipshade
element
easement
rules runs like a tear
crawling
like a tear
of breaking
dark

the delicate
beams
unravelments
embattlements
sizzling
and through
the worlds
spills
freedom
rising up
tumbling
wayside
down

hauling
visions
and brilliant
sharp edge
poignant
rushes

a gasp
stolen
and a shove
into the
delve
of a harrowing
storm

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Comments

Ian.T

Tue, 2013-09-24 18:34

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This seems like a Gem stone cutter
releasing the beauty of a stone
to blaze into its fulfillment,
Can't think what else it can be,
but that is just the way I read of things
and the picture it gives me.
Yours ian.T

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