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D...e..m..a..r..c..a..s..h..u..n....

Submitted by Esker on Thu, 2013-06-06 14:44

smooth silk the glitter balm
the flat mirror vision
smooth sticky gloss
svelte walk
plumped talk

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Editing - rough draft

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Rula

Thu, 2013-06-06 15:32

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For at least the new voc.
Demarcation (which I suppose is your intended title) a catchy one by the way
And "svelt"
Can I say your piece is of svelte one? For it really is.

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loved

Fri, 2013-06-07 16:11

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none can shun
your voice is shweet
so loveoly words
only such beauty in dead words
esker alone can inject
at best at worst
occupashun
is his creating verse

loved

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