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wist

the edge
strong cuts away the swath
the vestige wraiths like sails keep

I am a halo bound to earth
I feel the strain of your wings
beautiful and raised

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a true angel amongst the ordinary~

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and full of visuals and emotion
awesome - as usual
love judy
xxx

'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)

but explain some

loved

not yet grounded although home
for the moment

this is a poem for someone very dear to me

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drinking what??

where with whom
answer thread bare
if to ask
Loved can dare!

loved

Savour the bite that grips
the sails fill
the breeze cuts rainbows
round your poem.

I love to clip and fold paper,
Love to you Steven from Ann.

Its for Anna, of course, I know that.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

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