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One Too Many ,..Perhaps
I have composed countless poems
As you all know
Since I have no fixed mind ,
nor fixture of mind,
I am a unique entity...
No two poems of mine are alike,
as I believe in variety
Loved Style,
All my while .
I stand in no row or queue
of recognition ,
as I know twill never come,
when I am alive .
But then it will be too late
Posthumously
Which they will.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
Roscoe Lane
Tue, 2011-10-25 18:17
Not enough,
Not enough my friend, keep them coming. Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
magics02
Tue, 2011-10-25 19:20
Loved
You got the attention many times over lean to your writing and worry about that being the best you can do and not how many friends you can count on you two hands:) We all know how you feel well I should reiterate that I know how you feel. Stop the worrying about folks visiting your pages and concentrate more on your writing you present to your readers and the rest will come... Be happy
Mona
loved
Wed, 2011-10-26 00:41
Thank you to both above
and to all those
who shall visit soon
thanks from Loved
loved
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