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The Burrell Collection

The poem is about a famous collector of antiquities who left his collection to the people of Glasgow. This is housed in a custom - made building in the woods in Pollock Park. There the River Cart flows and my imagination was fired. Enjoy !

THE BURRELL COLLECTION

William Burrell's Merchant Fleet
Brought wealth to buy antiques and art.
He gifted all to Glasgow City,
To be kept in Pollock Park.

A masterpiece was built to house them,
Stone and glass within the woods.
Now ancient gods of Rome and Egypt
Stare at trees and frown and brood.

Glass and stone and trees combine,
With nature's bounty, ancient glories.
Statues, facing out to woods,
Communicate with old, old stories

As ancient kings and queens of Egypt
Whisper stories to the trees,
Tales from their "Book of the Dead"
Are carried by the fickle breeze.

And in the trees the magpies dream
Of river Nile in annual flood,
The precious water bringing life
To birds and people, fertile mud.

Magpies' bright eyes coldly glitter.
Pharoah's knowledge inside head
Magpies, crows and seagulls gather
River Cart will soon flow red.

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Structured: Western
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typo on Burrell in title - whoops!

TIME FLIES LIKE AN ARROW, BUT FRUIT FLIES LIKE A BANANA

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Thanks for your input, Ian , but this was never intended to be about Burrell. He was a war profiteer who cynically played the market in shipping during WW1. It was meant to be more an Alfred hitchcock thing . "The Birds"

Ian

TIME FLIES LIKE AN ARROW, BUT FRUIT FLIES LIKE A BANANA

author comment

Spot on with the spell check , Rosi, many thanks. Rhyme scheme seems OK though, A-B-C-B.
Thanks for taking the time to respond, glad you liked it

Love

Ian xx

TIME FLIES LIKE AN ARROW, BUT FRUIT FLIES LIKE A BANANA

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