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Touch me, caress me Dark Angel
Let me feel your soft flesh close to mine,
For eons have you taunted and teased me
I feel now that this is my time.

Come closer Dark Angel come closer
Too long have you stood far away,
Draw near let me free your wild passion
As to my commands you obey.

Your furnace red hair almost burning;
Your raven black eyes all aglow;
Your proud breasts lifted and pointing;
Let me free them from your tight robes.

Now I feel your exitement mounting
As your quivering lips brush mine,
Fingers caressing, soft white throat,
Arms, Legs closely entwined.

But it's all a dream Dark Angel
To tease me all through lonely nights;
How you laugh as I suffer the torments,
Deprived of all sense of delight.

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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content


Steamy. Someone may need a cold shower after reading this. Love the flow and language. Good job.


Thank you Rose. I think not the most popular but I enjoy writing my Dark Angel series most of all. Several more in the pipeline, I just have to be careful not to get too explicit with them. Or should I just go for it. We shall see. Alex

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