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DANCING

Submitted by Geremia on Tue, 2016-05-03 17:00

DANCING

Every movement I make
Is a dance in slow motion,
a poetry of the body in distress
each thrust into the void suggests
a primal grace beyond rigidity,
and the sublimity of the spirit
defying constriction of space.
it is who we are we Warriors
of the human race.

Richard for Joe

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scribbler

Fri, 2016-05-20 16:29

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There are wars fought in places other than battle fields. Where they are fought matters not. What matters is that we Do fight rather than surrender.......stan

Geremia

Fri, 2016-05-20 18:54

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well said, stan.

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lovedly

Sun, 2016-05-22 02:46

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as long as Richards
with us does remain
and
we all are enjoying your fights
ah 'tis poetry
in gods domain
urs on the earth for ever shall remain
Joe

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