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A LUZ --Portuguese -English
A LUZ
A luz que brilha dentro
é como uma chama de vela
tremulando ao vento,
uma vacilação da alma
em antecipação assustadora
abatido pelo Tempo
enfraquecido até morrer...
THE LIGHT
the light that shines within
is like a candle flame that
flickers in the wind
a soul wavering
in frightful anticipation
weathered by Time
and dying…
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Comments
Rula
Thu, 2016-04-21 11:02
What can I say Joe
This is poetry! True poetry!Simple yet reflects true raw feelings
Who writes alike shall never die
❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Geremia
Thu, 2016-04-21 13:43
What a great compliment, Rula
What a great compliment, Rula
joe
lovedly
Thu, 2016-04-21 12:18
and yes this is also
THE BIRD FLIES
WHERE IS HOME!
Geremia
Thu, 2016-04-21 13:44
muito obrigado,,amigo meu.
muito obrigado,,amigo meu.
Geezer
Thu, 2016-04-21 18:33
I have images...
of a candle popping and sputtering against the wind and the light that's shed showing the true human spirit. ~ Gee.
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Geremia
Fri, 2016-04-22 09:28
yes, that is what the light
yes, that is what the light is...
joe