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Bloodstone
Member since April 27, 2010
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the seed and the flower
quite like an old man’s gaze
I thought I felt my shadow grow
as the survey extended to gash
the weighted blade sparing the bones
the sole horizon no longer pure
against marring pedestals of mud
which these hands hollow built
growing harder with each sun
seeking to silence the past
is of no use for the chamber swells
the reverberating echoes
live and shake the cracks
the only perpetual character
I’ve stoked the flames to rise
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to blaze against the dark to the sky
to illume the depths brighter
but it only serves to enrich
dark darker light lighter
no use to shun or to forget
my haunts crying need
to no longer choke blind nor deafen
my past wants me to succeed
it serves to build
and I my own architect
plan the lay of materials
now thought as obscure
but fleeting dreams that enter or run
being such that questions on life begun
are as hard to deduce as their origin
it seems to bark at logic
these manifesting thoughts
that given power can compost the past
their taste only fitting my desire
though memories weigh in
forever following impetus
it is my perceptions that ward
shape and drive the form
my thoughts are dreamers
that never wake in passing
they whisper for I to ear
and hope they fare well externally
the gaze of an old man
though veiled is learned
I am ever present to inception
the seed and the flower
Bloodstone’s timeline
- April 2025
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26 SatAnniversary
15 years of membership
- April 2020
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26 SunAnniversary
10 years of membership
- April 2015
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26 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2014
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28 SatReceived a critique
on the seed and the flower from @themoonman
"I do like the poem but it is so abstract there is little to say other than it sounds good read out loud, for me a poem needs more than that. absolutely loved the read though, thanks for posting, Richard" -
23 Mon
- April 2014
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28 MonReceived a critique
on Like Fingers from @swamp-witch
"as well, but I think the added syllable makes the line read more smoothly. I really appreciate you taking the time to share your interpretation!" -
28 MonReceived a critique
on Like Fingers from @Ian.T
"The reference to fingers just made me drool. Then someone has to spoil it all and talk about family values. They are damn lucky that they can refer to a family LOL.I shall have to resurrect my early diaries from England…" -
17 Thu
- February 2012
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06 MonMost-discussed work
Scene from a dream (a working title. Storytelling workshop)
13 critiques to date.
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06 MonPosted a poem
Scene from a dream (a working title. Storytelling workshop)
"Night-time stride beneath fair moon-light," - April 2011
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26 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2010
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30 FriFirst critique offered
on "Battle of Wits on Chequered Soil" by @raj
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27 TueFirst publication
Caught in this web... to shine
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26 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
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Location: South Africa, ZAF
Recent Work
the seed and the flower
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Like Fingers
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Death Eternal
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Death and the soliloquy
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Flux
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Moon of the Morn'
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Thrown to the coals
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Workshops
| Skill level: | ||||
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| Storytelling in Verse | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool, Plunge Pool | Started 2012-02-04 | Concluded |
| More Meter | (syllabus) | Shark Pool, Plunge Pool | Started 2012-01-11 | Concluded |