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Battle of Wits on Chequered Soil
On a piece of land, not alien in time
sixty four hamlets, dwell in peace
till seeds of lust, bewitch their smiles
greeding for every inch, they toil..
Once united souls, stand devoid of spirit
blind to shadows creeping, in the all serene light
a unified light, now split as white and black
two illusions of Faith, fallen apart...
Uniformed in isms, one black, one white
battle lined in rows, avowed to fight
their king in the middle, conniving his moves
while troops take guard, in rank and file..
This battle of wits, holds mercy for none
each soul is pawned, with no love in return
when lust and hate, take centre stage
blinded is the love, in this holocostic craze...
The battle may be won, by a black or a white
with all the king's horses and men supine
the king may rejoice, in disillusioned pride
left counting all stars, which dazzled his life...
..sublime_ocean....
Critiques
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
Sublime
raj
16 years 1 month ago
it does..doesnt it?…:)
Bloodstone
16 years 1 month ago
Nice one.
raj
16 years 1 month ago
thank you
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
You are really Sublime!
raj
16 years 1 month ago
Hi Shirley…appreciate your