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BettyBuff
Member since October 31, 2012
Member for 13 years, 7 months
My Mote Of Dust
One can look at a cooling cinder
in awe
of it's once brilliance
The way I now look at your kinder
face
in my remembrance
The one corner of my Universe
I know for sure
the Laws of Nature
conspired
to transcend
the physical bounds of my life
I know my value
you showed me
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that in our cosmic neighbourhood
I was unique
Our mote of dust
is the only place
where love exists
BettyBuff’s timeline
- October 2022
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31 MonAnniversary
10 years of membership
- January 2018
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20 SatReceived a critique
on My Mote Of Dust from @Chiori
"nice poem carefully constructed, I like your use of words" -
19 FriReceived a critique
on My Mote Of Dust from @Eumolpus
"I especially like the last line. I was not sure of this stanza "the Laws of Nature conspired to transcend the physical bounds of my life" As an abstract reader, i do not have a reference for what that means. Losing a fa…" -
18 ThuReceived a critique
on My Mote Of Dust from @weirdelf
"Whatever, it doesn't matter, this is a lovely, profound piece of work. Thank you for sharing it." -
16 Tue
- October 2017
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31 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2017
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18 Thu
- April 2017
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22 Sat
- October 2013
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31 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- January 2013
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15 TueHighest posting month
January 2013 — 12 poems
- November 2012
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11 Sun
- October 2012
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31 WedFirst critique offered
on "Samhain" (since unpublished) by @Dalton
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31 WedFirst publication
HANDMAIDEN
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31 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Married, Complex, Argumentative/Timid depending on whom I'm speaking to. Acid wit, honed by sarcasm. Could be intellectual if I wasn't so lazy. I am rich because i'm not lazy....see the theme developing here? Could be a good writer, If I wasn't...(you finish it off!)...who remembers the original line?
Location: Sheffield, ENGLAND
I don't respond to bullying
especially intellectual bullying.
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Workshops
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| GREAT POETRY (a workshop) | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2013-01-19 | Concluded |