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Vindictiveness...
Sour taste of defeat
An inescapable truth
Is born from wisdom
Style / type:
Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Sun, 2023-02-12 10:59
Brilliant
Three lines...says so much....well done...I may need to try a Haiku.
~RoseBlack~
Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-02-12 11:20
dear geezer,
so very true!
*hugs, Cat
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Seren
Sun, 2023-02-12 11:20
Dearest Bro
Wow, this says a thousand things in only three lines, I think it's a brilliant Haiku!
Bravo!!!!
I really think this is one of your best-est Haiku. Nice Grammer huh? lol
love and higgliest bugs Sis xox
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Rosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2023-02-12 18:38
Hmmm
Hmmm… let me think
Tim
Seren
Mon, 2023-02-13 09:16
Xox
Xox
“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats
Geezer
Mon, 2023-02-13 09:26
Thank you so much...
It's always so nice to hear from you. I liked yours too, as you can tell. ~ Geezer.
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