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Vindictiveness...

Submitted by Geezer on Sun, 2023-02-12 10:09

Sour taste of defeat
An inescapable truth
Is born from wisdom

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Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction): 
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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RoseBlack

Sun, 2023-02-12 10:59

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Three lines...says so much....well done...I may need to try a Haiku.

~RoseBlack~

Candlewitch

Sun, 2023-02-12 11:20

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so very true!

*hugs, Cat

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Seren

Sun, 2023-02-12 11:20

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Wow, this says a thousand things in only three lines, I think it's a brilliant Haiku!

Bravo!!!!

I really think this is one of your best-est Haiku. Nice Grammer huh? lol

love and higgliest bugs Sis xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Rosewood Apothecary

Sun, 2023-02-12 18:38

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Hmmm… let me think

Tim

Seren

Mon, 2023-02-13 09:16

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Xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Geezer

Mon, 2023-02-13 09:26

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It's always so nice to hear from you. I liked yours too, as you can tell. ~ Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place

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