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Vindictiveness...

Sour taste of defeat
An inescapable truth
Is born from wisdom

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Structured: Eastern
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content

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Three lines...says so much....well done...I may need to try a Haiku.

~RoseBlack~

so very true!

*hugs, Cat

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Wow, this says a thousand things in only three lines, I think it's a brilliant Haiku!

Bravo!!!!

I really think this is one of your best-est Haiku. Nice Grammer huh? lol

love and higgliest bugs Sis xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

Hmmm… let me think

Tim

Xox

“The world is full of magic things, patiently waiting for our senses to grow sharper.” — W.B. Yeats

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