The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem effectively uses narrative and descriptive language to create a vivid picture of the setting and the emotional journey of the speaker. The use of specific details, like the address and the "cold spot" behind the closet door, adds to the authenticity and believability of the story being told.

However, the poem could benefit from a more consistent use of rhythm and meter. The lines vary greatly in length and syllable count, which can disrupt the flow of the poem and make it more difficult for the reader to follow along. Experimenting with a more consistent structure could enhance the overall impact of the poem.

The poem also seems to shift in tone and focus towards the end, with the introduction of the speaker's newfound power and anger. While this could be an effective twist, it feels somewhat abrupt in its current form. Providing more foreshadowing or build-up to this moment could make it feel more earned and impactful.

Finally, the poem could benefit from a more careful use of punctuation. There are several lines that do not end with any punctuation, which can create confusion about where one thought ends and the next begins. Using punctuation more consistently could help to clarify the meaning and improve the flow of the poem.

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Hi Cat.

I've already told you that I'm not going anywhere near 2714 Girard Street. However, with that said, I sure enjoyed the poem.

I think 2714 Girard Street would make a good title for the novel you should write. I'd buy it and curse you for writing it every time I re-read it.

Thanks, I think. -Will