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The First of May.

Pink dawn
The first of May

Newer ones:-

Pink satin
Black impresario


Pink sky at night
Shepherd's delight
Pink sky in the morning
Shepherd's warning.

March winds and April showers.))

Lost in the colours 
Of the sky 
The blackbird's voice

In the pink mist
The blackbird's song
Spring morning

Pink mist
Midday moods
Grey rain

Pink mist
Grey rain

Pink mist
Grey silhouette

Style / type: 
Free verse
Last few words: 
Now add yours? Ann.
Editing stage: 


A test of words,

Spring dawn
a fleeting chorus
Blackbird sings

Not the time
May's herald

Birds frolic

Thank you for the smile this brought, once you start to write as you have done it becomes more clear and there are so many words I shall stop here,
Yours Ian

There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..

"Spring dawn
a fleeting chorus
Blackbird sings"

I liked this one best Ian, as the opening of Spring established the season,
the chorus that we hear all too little of as it seems to stop too soon,
and the slight melancholy of the blackbird, mourning it's passing.

Good effort Ian. Love to you from Ann.

"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.

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