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THE FIRST OF MAY +
The First of May.
Pink dawn
Blackbird
The first of May
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Newer ones:-
Pink satin
Black impresario
Spring
((Cliché's:-
Pink sky at night
Shepherd's delight
Pink sky in the morning
Shepherd's warning.
March winds and April showers.))
Lost in the colours
Of the sky
The blackbird's voice
In the pink mist
The blackbird's song
Spring morning
Pink mist
Midday moods
Grey rain
Pink mist
Grey rain
April
Pink mist
Grey silhouette
Autumn
Style / type:
Free verse
Last few words:
Now add yours?
Ann.
Editing stage:
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Comments
Ian.T
Wed, 2013-05-08 04:07
Ann
A test of words,
Spring dawn
a fleeting chorus
Blackbird sings
Cuckoo
Not the time
May's herald
Birds frolic
Seriously
Spring
Thank you for the smile this brought, once you start to write as you have done it becomes more clear and there are so many words I shall stop here,
Yours Ian
.
There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Nordic cloud
Sat, 2013-05-11 04:12
I liked this one best Ian
"Spring dawn
a fleeting chorus
Blackbird sings"
I liked this one best Ian, as the opening of Spring established the season,
the chorus that we hear all too little of as it seems to stop too soon,
and the slight melancholy of the blackbird, mourning it's passing.
Good effort Ian. Love to you from Ann.
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.