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Sunsets
Sunsets
Written by Kelly Ann Wilson
I look for you in sunsets
When the leaves change in the fall
I find you in your daughter
When I need to be strong
I look for you in your old truck
I still pass by around town
I wear your warm plaid jacket in the northern winter
When I walk this country ground
I look for you in music
For a sign in the darkest times
When someone is in need of kindness
In your gifts that became mine
I look for you in that small town
And on those rocky river shores
When they play “The Black Velvet Band” on St. Patrick’s Day
In airplanes and airports
I look for you in your brother
Who looks just like you did
When he wears your old hats and sweaters
I catch a glimpse of you again
I look for you in the children
Who looked up to you like you were 10 feet tall
Now, they are all the ways
The best parts of you live on
I look for them in butterflies
And old men with glasses
And tree-lined driveways
In hockey games and gardens
In superheroes
And homemade buns
You see, I never have forgotten
I remember everyone
I look for you in sunsets
And miss you when that sun goes down
And everywhere that I go
I still see you all around
Written April 23, 2023
© 2023 Kelly Ann Wilson
Comments
Geezer
Wed, 2023-05-17 08:53
Ahhh...
you make me feel this one keenly. My brother from another mother and friend of fifty years, passed away last year, and I see him in many guises. I see his antiquated Afro-sixties hairstyle, his smooth gait and slender body, the mannerisms of old.
Although I realize almost immediately that it cannot be, my breath catches for a moment, and I see him in the pose of an old memory. Your piece has brought this to mind, and I feel his loss, but I also feel lucky to have known him and shared those times. You brought all that together, with your descriptions of the different scenes. Well done and thank you! ~ Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place
Candlewitch
Tue, 2023-05-23 08:57
dear Kelly Ann,
a beautifully crafted poem... makes my breath catch in my throat! congratulations on the win!
*hugs, Cat
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Tiffany Smith
Sat, 2023-05-27 00:43
wonderful
you gave me tears and a smile as it reminded me of my late husband and how hard life can sometimes be. Beautifully written and I'm new here so i have no wise words for you. I thought it was wonderful.
Tiffany K. Smith
Tigger Kaz
Sun, 2023-06-04 17:53
Heart felt
I loved the emotion in this poem. I real heart felt poem.
Congratulations on your win and I look forward to reading more if your poetry.
scribbler
Sun, 2023-06-04 18:59
Yes
Those who we hold dear are with us even after they have been long gone