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Stuffology

Submitted by Lavender on Tue, 2024-01-23 10:39

Humbled ~
My head was as big as a pumpkin,
so full of pride was I,
that those around grew ticked-off
and baked me in a pie.

Indignant ~
Please don't step on
the poor dog's tail
just because
it is there.

Fear ~
Will I
be quite -
alone?

Joy ~
Happiness,
on a
trampoline

Solitude ~
There was only
one,
a single note,
unsung.

Anticipation ~
You, me...
all night.

Love ~
Aah...
yes...

Style / type: 
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity): 
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage: 
Editing - rough draft
Content level: 
Not Explicit Content

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Candlewitch

Tue, 2024-01-23 12:02

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I love it!!

It feels like the way I talk when first woken from sleep! I hope you write more in this style!

* hugs, Cat

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Lavender

Tue, 2024-01-23 18:44

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My muse has been feeling a little more playful lately.
Thank you for reading!
L

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