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Soft Sandal Feet

Soft Sandal Feet

Soft Sandal Feet

A line drawn in the sand/

Immersed with heavy fallen tears..,
A beat of sweat
One word would often calm my fears !
With both waiting hands/

Torn amidst the heavy burden of the sun..,
With solace of peace and inner tranquility !
The pitter patter of soft sandal feet/
Would you now open your heart's door to him ?

There really is no other way/

One word would calm my fears..,
The silence in his beckoning call !
He does not scream as the world does,
Nor does he bit like Satan does !

In the garden he knew..,
For even then he had his eye on you..,
Even evil Judas knew..,
Yet he didn' claim him as his own..,

The cross was heavy !

But through it all he still pressed on/
Despite what the naysayers did to his beard ?
Pulling it out until the blood sprayed abroad !
He was wounded for our transgression's
Bruised for our iniquities/

A small child will dream/

At times a bit complacent from other's..,
Yet living alone in his fantasy world..,
With toys in the sandbox..,
Along with many other dreams !

Nothing on Earth is what it actually seems ?

Watching the clowns coming alive at night !
It's gravitational pull may bring some down/
The mere notion of reaching Spring !
Yet he is the most understood at heart/

Making a fresh start he will often loose his key's ?

Now as a teenager,
A crowd is watching you !
Just to see you bleed/
The sound of soft sandal feet..,
Now out on the patio/
Perplexed and torn..,

With the New World Order !

Skulls that are filled with fragmented bones/
A grand illusion of tormented death..,
Almost a papal view with a rose bud made out of real flesh !
Torn/

Resilient from the actual norm/

You seek guidance from the anti - Christ/
To take the mark with the hope to by some bread !
America, wake up !
What is going on inside of your head/
The time is now to repent !
Forget about looking back at the plow/
A soul that sin's is a soul that dies !
You may have to think.,
Before you can catch all those pop fly's !
People wake up !
By Mario William Vitale

© 2010 Mario William Vitale (All rights reserved)

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Comments

but twas predicted...
Jesus did die for our sins
threw the money lenders from the
temple...made it pure again
Sure..the church would forgive ur
sins..Pay it with touch and go..
loan U money for bingo..coke and
hookers at the next que...pay touch
nd go...buy your working girls...
or other..touch and go
all under the same temple
or satan would have it so!!

beautiful as he is...

some say he is coming back
I would rather he then the horsemen
but either or..

its coming!

Thank U
Mr Wolf!

I believe this poem would have the
impact you seek if you made it shorter,
less is more.

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